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6月13日雅思大作文真題參考范文
2019-06-19 16:27   作者:新航道   閱讀量:

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  2019年6月13日雅思大作文題目

  個人無助于解決環境問題嗎?

  “Some people think that the environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that the problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take some actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ”

 

  解析&審題

  本題重復2014年7月26日真題。

  解決環境問題,是大公司和政府的事情,個人沒有什么作用嗎?

  可能有些同學馬上就開始全面反駁,歷數個人在解決環境問題中的作用。但既然題目中提到了“有人認為環境問題是個人無法解決的”,我們就應該對該觀點進行回應:的確,有些環境問題是個人無能為力的(比如解決全球氣候變暖,海洋污染等問題是需要政府間的合作才能完成的)。

  然后再轉折回來,論述個人在環境保護中可以做到的事情,并論證這些事情對于解決環境問題非常重要,從而回應題目觀點“如果個人不采取行動,環境問題就無法得到解決”。

  老師筆記

  Nowadays, there is a heated debate over whether individual efforts are necessary in addressing  environmental problems. Some people claim that the environmental problems are so big that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment and only governments and large companies canmake a difference. However, others hold the opposite opinion that individual efforts, small as they may be, are also crucial to improve the environment, so each individual should take action. Otherwise, the environmental problems cannot be solved.

  如今,人們對在解決環境問題方面是否需要個人努力進行了熱烈的辯論。有些人聲稱環境問題太大了,個人對改善環境無能為力,只有政府和大公司才能有所作為。然而,另一些人則持相反的觀點,即個人的努力,盡管很小,卻對改善環境至關重要,因此,每個人都應采取行動。否則,環境問題就無法得到解決。

  解析

  本段先引出話題,重述題目觀點。這種開頭法是最常規的雅思作文開頭,需要對原題的具體措辭進行一定程度的改變。

  (1)A heated discussion 激烈的討論

  (2)Address environmental problems 解決環境問題

  (3)Make a difference 產生重要影響

  (4)Small at they may be, .... 盡管很小,但是......

  (5)Crucial 關鍵的

 


  As we all know, there are some environmental problems which are indeed too big for individuals to solve directly. For example, in face of climate change such as global warming, individuals can do very little to fight against it and only the governments have the ability to deal with it. What’s more, to solve some environmental issues even needs international cooperation. If mass water pollution is caused by oil spill in Pacific, it will beurgent for different countries to make joint efforts to make water clean. In this case, individuals have neither the professional skills nor the power to find a solution.

  大家都知道,有些環境問題實在太大,個人不能直接解決。例如,面對類似全球變暖的氣候變化,個人能做的非常有限,只有政府才有能力對付它。不僅如此,為了解決一些環境問題,甚至需要國際合作。如果大量的水污染是由于太平洋地區的石油泄漏,各國必須共同努力實現水的清潔。在這種情況下,個人既不具備專業技能,也不具備能力來找到解決方案。

  解析

  本段論證有些環境問題的確需要政府出面解決,個人無法提供直接幫助。

  (1)Climate change 氣候變化

  (2)Global warming 全球變暖

  (3)Urgent 緊迫的

  (4)Joint efforts 共同的努力

  (5)Professional skills 專業技能

  

  Although it is very difficult for individuals to solve those big environmental problems, individuals still have their share of responsibility for environmental protection. Actually, individuals can do many small but powerful things to help to improve the environment, such as garbage sorting, driving less, refusing to use disposable chopsticks, and so on. Indeed, if everyone does the right thing in everyday life, such big environmental problems as global warming or sea level rise may not have happened at all.

  雖然個人很難解決這些大的環境問題,但個人仍然有份責任來保護環境。實際上,個人可以做許多小而有力的事情來改善環境,如垃圾分類、少開車、拒絕使用一次性筷子等等。誠然,如果每個人都在日常生活中做了正確的事情,全球變暖或海平面上升等大環境問題可能根本就不會發生。

  解析

  本段論述作為個人,我們能夠做什么。最后一句表明,個人的努力對于環境保護至關重要。

  (1)Have their share of responsibility for... 對......有一份責任

  (2)Disposable chopsticks 一次性筷子

  (3)Sea level rise 海平面上升

  (4)Not...at all... 一點也不

 


  To put it into a nutshell, solving environmental problems needs joint efforts from both governments and individuals. Everyone should be aware of its importance and try to be a responsible person. Only in this way can environmental problems be solved effectively.

  簡而言之,解決環境問題同時需要政府和個人的共同努力。每個人都應該意識到它的重要性,并努力成為一個負責任的人。只有這樣環境問題才能得到有效地解決。

  解析

  本段是結尾段,首先總結前文觀點,同時表明自己的立場。

  (1)to put it into a nutshell 總而言之

  (2)Be aware of... 意識到.......

  (3)Only in this way can... 只有這樣才......


  7分范文

  Nowadays, there is a heated debate over whether individual efforts are necessary in addressing  environmental problems. Some people claim that the environmental problems are so big that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment and only governments and large companies can make a difference. However, others hold the opposite opinion that individual efforts, small as they may be, are also crucial to improve the environment, so each individual should take action. Otherwise, the environmental problems cannot be solved.

  As we all know, there are some environmental problems which are indeed too big for individuals to solve directly. For example, in face of climate change such as global warming, individuals can do very little to fight against it and only the governments have the ability to deal with it. What’s more, to solve some environmental issues even needs international cooperation. If mass water pollution is caused by oil spill in Pacific, it will be urgent for different countries to make joint efforts to make water clean. In this case, individuals have neither the professional skills nor the power to find a solution.

  Although it is very difficult for individuals to solve those big environmental problems, individuals still have their share of responsibility for environmental protection. Actually, individuals can do many small but powerful things to help to improve the environment, such as garbage sorting, driving less, refusing to use disposable chopsticks, and so on. Indeed, if everyone does the right thing in everyday life, such big environmental problems as global warming or sea level rise may not have happened at all.

  To put it into a nutshell, solving environmental problems needs joint efforts from both governments and individuals. Everyone should be aware of its importance and try to be a responsible person. Only in this way can environmental problems be solved effectively.

  (304 words)

  建議背誦的句子

  1. Some people claim that the environmental problems are so big that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment and only governments and large companies can make a difference.

  有些人聲稱環境問題太大了,個人對改善環境無能為力,只有政府和大公司才能有所作為。

  2. However, others hold the opposite opinion that individual efforts, small as they may be, are also crucial to improve the environment, so each individual should take action.

  然而,另一些人則持相反的觀點,即個人的努力,盡管很小,卻對改善環境至關重要,因此,每個人都應采取行動。

  3. Indeed, if everyone does the right thing in everyday life, such big environmental problems as global warming or sea level rise may not have happened at all.

  誠然,如果每個人都在日常生活中做了正確的事情,全球變暖或海平面上升等大環境問題可能根本就不會發生。


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